Reviews for Bad Day
DeathbyShadows chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
this is really good! you should check out one of my poems sometime...but they're not as good as yours and they don't rhyme. keep writing!
fictionalxbliss chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
Although the poem is good, it is slightly premature. There are some grammatical errors, but those should be easy to fix. The good thing about the poem being premature is that it presents the mindset of a teenage girl. Her heart may be broken, but it isn't love. Good job, though.
kunoichi-socks chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
I love the emotion you captured in this, very angsty and moody. Excellent work!