plz update soon !

i hope everything is ok with you ...just wondering if your going to continue this story since its been a long time since you updated!

Omg! That was amazing! Keep writing!

kyahhh! so adorable! I can't wait for more. I want more. I'm trying to guess how many pups (kids) Nova and Adolfo will have. I'm assuming more than 1... 4 perhaps? no, you've written baby kick or fluttering...so... 1? Boy? pwease? or maybe a boy and girl, but the girl doesn't kick? nice baby girl? :D I can't wait for more. Update soon please!

I'm not sure if I like this story or not for two main reasons.

I'm all for the whole dominant alpha male caveman thing because I find it quite sexy but at the same time your portrayal of women is poor. I understand that they are werewolves and therefore they'll be maternal and submissive (to an extent). All of your female characters are literally caricatures and all that comes to mind is "Stepford Wives" they are ultra submissive, they seem to have no voice and all they ever talk about is having pups and getting pregnant or finding a mate. It disappoints me to see someone of the same gender cast this poor, overused, and untrue light on women when we get enough of it from men.

Another thing that I really hate is Nova's feebleness, her whimpering and giggling. It is all she seems to do. She doesn't really say much either, and even though there are timid people that exist in the real world, every single character in your story seems to be a whimpering female, bar ONE who was only in about two chapters (I don't remember her name so that seems to say something about how much you feature women with an actual voice). Nova is completely naive and over innocent and helpless and small but perfect it is rather, no, VERY annoying sometimes. She has no redeeming qualities, she's the typical female that does not exist in the 21st century. I want to see her have more of a voice in this story because otherwise I will have to stop reading because it is depressing.

I also think you should work on character development and more dialogue. Sorry if this is harsh but your females are very aggravating.

Awwwwwwww Update Soon, can't wait to see what happens!

omg thats so cute when he comes back the baby starts moving lol! i cant wait for another chapter

Aww that was sweet at the end. Please update soon :D

Another good chapter. )

YAY!

About time you updated… I understand computer issues though. I am happy that they won the fight and I think that it is cute that the baby started moving when the father came home :)

Thanks for the update

:)

i loved the dream

Andre got what he deserved!

adolfo is so cool

adolfo fights so well. and i am so excited about the baby

Update quickly this time!