lovely filler chapter but next chapter you have to continue on with the plot

Really good, you did what I said and added more senses in, I see. Very good! That's about all I can say now, so yeah, good job!

love it. i'm very interested and intrigued to see what plot lines begin to unravel.

I thought the sex scene was fine :3

And I liked the chapter, as usual. I did like the added bit of humor as well.

i'm loving this story so far. keep up the work. maybe try to have more romance in the story btw

LOVED LOVED LOVED IT! I just found this story and I have to say its amazing! I love reading wolf stories! Please update soon!

Really good so far. The really only thing I have to say is that because your characters are 'werewolves' you might want to add more of the canine senses in. You've done good with sight and smell, but what about sound, taste, touch... You could also do some more animal instincts. As for the answers to your authors note:

1)Ok sex scene, maybe a little bit more graphic... Ok, you caught me, maybe just a little bit more sex needed in this book overall (in my opinion- trust me, I'm not proud of admitting that I want more action, it makes me feel like a total loser, lol...)

2)As for adding more humor in, perfect! Give Adolfo more character, and Nova too. I'm talking their personal favorites (food, places, memories, etc...)

P.S. Maybe put a little bit more competition over Nova in the next Chapters... Make Adolfo fight for her and WANT/NEED her more. It seems like everything is automaticly ok from this point on for them as a couple. But, while you do that, make sure it's not the whole break up, i'm not good enough for you, get back together, break up for some space together, etc... I personally think that you need to, in order to make this story well formated, have them loyal to each other, never leaving eachother's sides the whole way through out the story.

-But that's just my opinion- Each man to their own. I know some will say the exact oppisite as me, but beggars can't be choosers, so go with what you truely believe is meant to happen in this book.

:-)

I love the story so far and can't wait for more. Please update soon :)

I did think it was strange how Adolfo was so gentle during their mating when he was holding his desires for days, but I understand your reasonings. _

I did really like the humor, it lightened the mood and the awkwardness of the moment for Nova. :)

that was an awesome chapter. i loved all of it. i thought the sex scene was amazing. excellent work!

i loved it! update soon please!

i thought this chapter went over rather well. good work!

THIS STORY IS AMAZING! I love everything about it! And I really enjoy the long chapters! Great job! Awesome characters..AAHH I'm in love with the whole thing! Keep going! You're doing awesome!

update soon please!

omg i can't wait for the next chapter! update son