| Reviews for Apples and Mangos |
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   Providance chapter 15 . 7/20/2011 Love it can't wait for more! |
| Ladyodd chapter 15 . 7/3/2011 I really like this story… there are a few errors here and there with the grammar, but otherwise it is a fun, passion filled story. Hope you update soon! :) |
| bluz chapter 15 . 7/2/2011 Its hard saying goodbye, so I can understand her frustration, which you illustrated well. I can't wait for the next chapter. |
| StaNdUPtomE chapter 15 . 7/2/2011 He is leaving :( update! |
| non.graceful chapter 8 . 7/1/2011 Hmm.. To me it seems as if you've taken a big dive into the sexual I tercourse and such but haven't dwelled enough with they're interests and such ... We understand that they're in love and whatnot but how have they achieved this, when they have barely even spoken? The relationship is obvious... It's just we barely know anythig abOut the characters themselves. |
| non.graceful chapter 1 . 6/30/2011 Hmm... You really need to describe scenes better and watch out for spelling mistakes and repeated phrases... I like the idea of this ... But you're not creating an atmosphere of fear or anything. Advice: re-write thus several times and observe which words work better in this scenario... Just build up the tension. Overal well done for thinking of this! |
| ItalianQT chapter 15 . 6/30/2011 He better come back to them! Good chapter! :) |
| Barbie95 chapter 15 . 6/30/2011 adolfo just totally makes my knees weak. nova and him are really cute together. update soon! |
| dragon eyes chapter 15 . 6/30/2011 loved it like always. keep up the good work |
| AT world's END chapter 15 . 6/30/2011 poor nova being left behind again |
| Taco Meat chapter 15 . 6/30/2011 is dino going to choose that one girl as his mate or is he too young for that? |
| tweetybird101 chapter 15 . 6/30/2011 loved it! don't let anything happen to adolfo or nova's father |
| The Cutting Edge chapter 15 . 6/30/2011 please update soon! i don't think i can handle waiting |
| college grad chapter 15 . 6/30/2011 i hope the battle goes well |
| TexanBerry chapter 15 . 6/30/2011 nova and adolfo are just adorable |