Reviews for advice of a dead pigeon
StoryMonster chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
I like the 'Go out and fly before you get tossed from the turbulent deep gray skies' part.

Pretty creative way of expressing a message!
rust phoenix chapter 1 . 12/22/2010
Interesting piece. Very creative and I like how it can be read symbolically without sounding forced. The formatting really suits the piece, such as the line length, bunched together words, and midline capitalization. I enjoyed how the capitalization gave the words a slightly different sound, and how you emphasized words that might not immediately stand out as being special and important. One thing I would suggest is that between "with a pigeon / it was a dead pigeon" some mark of punctuation might help, such as a period or semicolon.
R.I.N. Natsume chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
:D! Dead pigeons talk to you too? oh, good I thought I was crazy xD! :3 hehe, cute poem.

-R.I.N. Natsume
Pandora14213 chapter 1 . 11/30/2010
-thumbs up-
Rocky Swordleaf chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
uh...? hee...hee...that's...interesting?
notveryalice chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
This poem is morbid and wonderful and the words flow like music.

Just lovely. Thank you for sharing.
RuchiraMandal chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
I like the style, the tone... umm, do you think the title will sound better as 'advice from a dead pigeon'?
Xevious Cat chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
Lol that was weird but entertaining :)
seventhchords chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
I've seen my share of dead pigeons and they weren't pretty.. given that i think you've done a nice job with the subject matter haha. A quirky piece, but interesting no doubt to ponder over :)
thehobee chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
I was morbidly tickled by your summary and just had to take a look. I liked it, really! But the capitalised letters confused me. Is there a special significance?

Aww I love (well, kind of!) the ending!
monkey-moon chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
ROTF! Damn pigeons allus got sumpn to say.

I could picture the wry gleam in this squashed bird's eye so clearly. "So tell me. What would YOU do if you had wings. God gave us wings, but he forgot to tell us not to stand in the middle of the road. What a maroon."