OHM'gawd Chelkun WHAT WAS THAT!

I'm so angry I could barely read it and and and ugh

Why did Sohzen get kidnapped? Why the Hell is ARDOR SO USELESS? ANd what the fuck is going on? WTF?

You told me not to be angry but but I can't help it WTF?

Um...wha...? I's confuseded... :P. Definitely a chapter that was a challenge to read, but I managed to understand it...I think :P.

i love your writing

i was laughing my ass off the entire story so far

no idea wat happened this last chap

hope you update soon

Hi just wondering if you are going to continue this story. Um that's it... if you are update soon!

-midnightwrighter :)

this story is so friggin' awesome! i love it! :D

Okay what's the dealio with that part about Cher and Belial and Ardor... I'm very confused.

Also I knew you loved me. And why the heck would Blacky be into animals?

But anyone can be a seme or an Uke given the right sercumstances. Hehe ropes chains and some demon/god influence. *hinthint* Okay then *cracks knuckles*

Chelkun that was so amazing please update more I just can't wait to find out what happens, and I have to know what to call the legion it's just killing me inside. If you were a man I'd totally be all over you *sque*

*cough* okay now that that's over with...

So update soon okay bye now.

Make more insults! haha and yes love between sozhen and black!

Update soon!

-midnightwrighter :)

No love yet, even though they should be mates. I don't think you've used Sozhen to his fullest yet.

HI.

I can't believe you left such a cliffy... But it was good but you keep hinting at Black's past but not going further into it. GAH Why must you tourture me with these past hints gah

Um... Why doesn't black like men? I thought he was kinda gay... okay really gay... but what the hell is Ardor doing doing sitting around scratching his Ass? And where is the earing? GAH

Also Ardor should pick up that little urchant that was throwing apple cores and take him along with them... as another tormenter to Black... and then sohzen should kick the kids ass... Muhahahahhahahahaha.

Also the kid should have an unlimited bag of Apple cores and other unplesant things that he likes to throw.

Any way Black needs some lovin' but not rape... don't let him get raped please... I may think he needs the occasional abuse but not rape please! Oh and Sohzen should be the Uke... Snicker please... It'll be funny cause that means Black takes charge. Yeah!

Okay that's all... Oh yeah it was good by the way...

I love this story!

though i admit it is odd and twisted and with no dobt will lead to guys doing each other up the butt. good job!

This story is so hilarious! Update really really soon!

-midnightwrighter :)

maybe go into some more of the sexy thoughts otherwise just fine for one of the many sex stories on here