Reviews for A Little More Time Today
Der Adler Des Mondes chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
This poem reminded me a saying "live life to the fullest".

The poem itself flows easily and to my knowledge there is no awkward working that breaks it apart.

My favorite line...

"But when you were young

In this world of wandering

You dreamt of leaving your mark

And the world would remember you"

Because I am young, wondering how to leave a mark, how to make this a better world while I am still alive.

As I grow unfortunately, I find it increasingly hard _ as some try their best to stop you.