|Reviews for Treasured|
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/10/2020
I'm so happy this is finally being updated! Your prose is so beautiful and really makes the ancient-ness of Azi come alive. This is a wonderful story and I'm so excited to see where it leads. I'm glad that Owen is having desire for Azi as well. I'm still kind of hoping that the endgame will include Greg in there as well, but I might be asking too much of Azi lol. Thank you and I look forward to more.
| chibikodo chapter 6 . 1/10/2020
Oh Azi, it's so interesting that even with his fixation on Owen he can't stand the thought of Greg even though Greg makes his treasure happy. Azi is complicated- he is jealous and possessive and incapable of seeing what it is about Greg that makes Owen happy. It would be so much simpler if he could collect both of them instead.
| R. Ficst chapter 5 . 8/2/2019
A very fascinating story. Great sense of unease, building to something happening. Love what you have so far, and wish I could read where it goes.
| ImmanenceEnsured chapter 5 . 9/4/2018
This is so deliciously unbearable. When is Azi finally going to explode? This slow escalation you've got going is a masterful thing. This might just be one of my favourite stories right now, and it seems like it hasn't even really taken off yet. All four characters are so great. With few words you convery just enough. And with everything Azi thinks and says I feel the melancholy of old age and past glory. Such a great reading experience. Birdbrain's snark is the cherry on top. And Owen is so sweet, open-minded, loving. I hope Greg is the fool Azi thinks he is, otherwise the guy might start fighting back and I have a feeling then it won't be long before Azi bursts out of his skin.
Thank you SO MUCH for revisiting and re-writing this story. I love it a lot.
| chibikodo chapter 5 . 9/2/2018
Oh my. It's funny how irrational Azi is in his possessiveness- it would make sense that instead of getting jealous, he could just add Owen to his hoard as well since Owen seems to like Azi. Oh Azi.
| miaou chapter 4 . 8/4/2018
I'm so confused. Is Azi cursed? This is so weird.
I mean, I like it, but it's still weird XD
| chibikodo chapter 4 . 8/3/2018
Oh my. How strange that Azi can't remember the circumstances surrounding his current living and working arrangements. Can dragons get dementia? Also Greg sounds like a really good guy.
| Adassai chapter 4 . 8/2/2018
I am so excited to see updates again. I totally forgot about fictionpress all-together until it started emailing me that this story was updating again. Thanks so much! I really love the story so far, and I think Azi's torment and sorrow is so well expressed and yet somehow relatable. Also, shout out from someone who lives in Berkeley right now!
| somequirkymusings chapter 2 . 2/26/2015
So incredibly intriguing... I hope this is continued one day.
| Adassai chapter 2 . 2/24/2015
I really, really enjoyed this! It's nice seeing an older character. Oh god, I wish there were more :(
| Guest chapter 8 . 5/18/2014
I must say, I am in love with this story, and I look forward to reading more chapters in it. It is difficult for me to find interesting stories on this site, however this story truly captivated me. Why not update it?
| kiteoni chapter 8 . 4/29/2014
A friend recommended your story to me today because of a conversation we were having about my affinity with dragons. I absolutely love Azi, I can't even begin to describe how much.
| Grappla chapter 3 . 4/28/2014
My I love this story, your style and the old Dragon guy, such an interesting and unique thing you have going here, however a little sad to see so few chapters, hoping this story will be updated soon, I have been on a search for a good read for weeks.
| Pantu chapter 8 . 4/11/2014
Oh dear, I should really know better than to start something that hasn't been updated in a year. I loved this though, I like the crazy intensity and the slightly skewed view of what is happening because of the 1st person and a narrator that is only obsessed with one person. I like the bittersweet feel, and I love your descriptions in this - very melodramatic but yet they work perfectly all the same.
I'm wondering if maybe you've paused this for publishing, in which case could you do a chapter update when it's released? I shall be sad if this goes unfinished, but thank you for sharing your work.
| ImmanenceEnsured chapter 6 . 2/23/2014
This is brilliant, just saying. I'm re-reading it for the third time, and your prose keeps making me shiver, it's that amazing. I wish I could make this story into a feeling/taste/poem and just feel/taste/repeat it whenever. The tragedy that lurks underneath all of the sweetness and goodness, it's almost too much. Azi being a monster with conflicting desires, the sins he'll eventually have to commit if he takes what he wants and the repercussions those will have - I can't take it!