|Reviews for Heroes: Servants of Death|
| Lord Slayer chapter 2 . 11/26/2010
Much better, though I still caution against the princess discovering and accepting too soon the truth of her heritage. That said, the dream sequences are fine, its just that waking up and thinking, "Hey, that wasn't a dream, that was a memory," seems a little out there.
Then again, I'm still not entirerly sure aboout what conditions brought her to the human world anyway. Did she have her memory wiped and then just get dropped as she was somewhere and get adopted? Get turned into an infant and left as someone's doorstep? Reincarnated and given birth to by a human mother? I don't mean to ask for spoilers, but its hard to give advice on something when I've only got half the picture.
Once again, this shows great improvement over the last version, and I look forward to seeing more soon.