|Reviews for All Out, All Over|
| Subbie chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
this is amazing
| lianoid chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
Interesting poem. In some parts, the rhythm isn’t consistent with previous line, which I felt threw the flow off a bit and I didn’t like, but I understand how it can be sometimes, so no stress. I like how optimistic and yet realistic and open this was. Some parts weren’t as uplifting as others, but I think that’s the great balance you have going on here. Nice piece, definitely.
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