|Reviews for The Reason|
| HiddenFromYou chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
I really like the rhyming here. It all flows together very well and I didn't come across any words that seemed out of place or forced.
There was only one problem with the beat as well. This line: "shine your guiding light, help me do what's right" really needs another word. I'd suggest having 'help me to do what's right' as that fits in well. I read rhyming poems to a generic beat, which is what most readers are going to be doing.
I like the little author's note beneath the date. It's the kind of comment that can be linked to the poem in a lot of different ways and I think it's a good ending.
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