Reviews for Follow the leader
RainfallSeven chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
Wow, that was pretty intense!
Well written, too

Could you get rid of the numbers at the end of the paragraphs, though. They're quite distracting.
HeartLikePorcelain chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
o.o wow. it's amazing how much control one person can have over another no matter how bigger or stronger they are the other person can manage to mentally control them. love the story.