|Reviews for Words|
| LittlePieceLove chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
This is a very good piece.
I rarely review because I don't know what to say, but I just wanted to let you know that this is something I could read over and over.
Thanks for this, because I can definitely relate.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
I really like this piece because I think it describes silence really well. Especially in the first stanza I liked "drained out/washed away."
I also like how you used the word thoughtlessly. It made me wonder if the reason behind the silence was that there literally were no thoughts? That would be an interesting expiation.
I also liked the ending. It definitely made me wonder what once was. What was the relationship between these people who now have silence and what happened to change it? Nice job!
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