Reviews for About A Boy
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 5 . 6/4/2011
Beautiful. :) Rain does invade your senses, doesn't it?
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 4 . 6/4/2011
LOL, I love your author's note. But this is fun. Almond eyes, I like that. And the convo seems kinda odd to me, but I don't do any drugs, so I have no idea how those convos go. Haha.
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 3 . 6/4/2011
Love the idea of being a "clear thought together." Fabulous. Keep writing! :)
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 2 . 4/30/2011
Ah, when you say he's a Pisces, it all makes sense. Pisces are dreamers, full of wonder. And you're a poet, so you would be attracted to him. Love the "bright clean light." Lovely. Keep writing! :)
metal butterfly chapter 22 . 4/21/2011
I give you time, but I must say

it's better than anything

I've written passionate or not
obliviation chapter 2 . 3/2/2011
i enjoy the fact that you added his astrological sign to the end of this, reminds me of something my best friend would do.
metal butterfly chapter 17 . 2/13/2011
I can relate to this particular chapter.
in the city of neon and chrome chapter 7 . 1/25/2011
"matches, and muscles"

favorite line.
in the city of neon and chrome chapter 2 . 1/25/2011
i love how you wrote this-

like you're watching it from afar;

barely giving any hint of the emotion behind it.
drink me pretty chapter 13 . 12/6/2010
do you know what i love about this collection?

each entry is a spiritual journey on its own;

a glimpse of soul and universe that i had previously

thought lost unto myself that is suddenly accessible

by your words.

all connected by the greatest force of them all:

unquenchable love.

yeah, never stop writing.
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 12/4/2010
Even the same person is different from poem to poem. Keep writing! :)
drink me pretty chapter 6 . 11/30/2010
beautiful phrases,

profound symbolism.

if only i could find the pearls

hiding deep beneath the oceans

of my own mind the way you seem

to have found yours-
someone somewhere chapter 3 . 11/27/2010
"let's be a clear thought together"

the very implication of this statement,

the profundity, and romanticism-

oh, it makes me believe in the fantastical again.

you need to start writing more frequently.
i think that maybe chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
i could just about jizz in my pants (metaphorically. but not physcially :D)

ugh i'm just... i'm so happy and excited you're posting again.

makes me want to find a notebook.

poetic symbiosis? (your word).