|Reviews for About A Boy|
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 5 . 6/4/2011
Beautiful. :) Rain does invade your senses, doesn't it?
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 4 . 6/4/2011
LOL, I love your author's note. But this is fun. Almond eyes, I like that. And the convo seems kinda odd to me, but I don't do any drugs, so I have no idea how those convos go. Haha.
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 3 . 6/4/2011
Love the idea of being a "clear thought together." Fabulous. Keep writing! :)
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 2 . 4/30/2011
Ah, when you say he's a Pisces, it all makes sense. Pisces are dreamers, full of wonder. And you're a poet, so you would be attracted to him. Love the "bright clean light." Lovely. Keep writing! :)
| metal butterfly chapter 22 . 4/21/2011
I give you time, but I must say
it's better than anything
I've written passionate or not
| obliviation chapter 2 . 3/2/2011
i enjoy the fact that you added his astrological sign to the end of this, reminds me of something my best friend would do.
| metal butterfly chapter 17 . 2/13/2011
I can relate to this particular chapter.
| in the city of neon and chrome chapter 7 . 1/25/2011
"matches, and muscles"
| in the city of neon and chrome chapter 2 . 1/25/2011
i love how you wrote this-
like you're watching it from afar;
barely giving any hint of the emotion behind it.
| drink me pretty chapter 13 . 12/6/2010
do you know what i love about this collection?
each entry is a spiritual journey on its own;
a glimpse of soul and universe that i had previously
thought lost unto myself that is suddenly accessible
by your words.
all connected by the greatest force of them all:
yeah, never stop writing.
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 12/4/2010
Even the same person is different from poem to poem. Keep writing! :)
| drink me pretty chapter 6 . 11/30/2010
if only i could find the pearls
hiding deep beneath the oceans
of my own mind the way you seem
to have found yours-
| someone somewhere chapter 3 . 11/27/2010
"let's be a clear thought together"
the very implication of this statement,
the profundity, and romanticism-
oh, it makes me believe in the fantastical again.
you need to start writing more frequently.
| i think that maybe chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
i could just about jizz in my pants (metaphorically. but not physcially :D)
ugh i'm just... i'm so happy and excited you're posting again.
makes me want to find a notebook.
poetic symbiosis? (your word).