Reviews for Reading A Book
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
I really like this. I love how without the title this would be completely confusing. I also love the way you described reading. I can completely relate and it was really beautiful. Your word choices like cicd and lucidly worked really well. As did the rest of your descriptions. The only thing is the repetition of i know between the second and third stanza. It was kind of awkward if read out loud.

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Archia chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
You describe reading a book beautifully, I was captured by the first line as it is true.
HiddenFromYou chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
I liked how short this was. You made it compact and yet powerful and that's hard to find in a lot of poetry.

I also lihe the rhyming, as everything sounded natural and flowed really well.

I thought the end was a little rushed though, as if you wanted to get somewhere by the end, but found you were running out of space and/or ideas about to what to fill the space with.

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