Reviews for when does this world ever give you lemons?
lymli chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
brushing her face against your cheek, smelling

of sunshine and soil and sleek creek water,

I like that part, it's so cool.
tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 11/30/2010
i like this. really honest and pure.

i would love opinions on my work from a writer like you - it would mean a lot!