|Reviews for when does this world ever give you lemons?|
| lymli chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
brushing her face against your cheek, smelling
of sunshine and soil and sleek creek water,
I like that part, it's so cool.
| tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 11/30/2010
i like this. really honest and pure.
i would love opinions on my work from a writer like you - it would mean a lot!