Reviews for Just Because
HiddenFromYou chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
I like the sense of foreboding that went with me as I read through the poem because I knew something was about to happen, and it probably wasn't going to be good, but I didn't know what. You kept the sense of mystery because of that as well.

I also like the fact that you introduced two different emotions in the last line. One was smugness of behalf of the writer and one was anger at him for not helping the person. I really like that you've managed to convey two emotions as that shows a talented writer.

The 'no' at the beginning of the last looks unnatural, even though I know it's right like that. -_-

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