Reviews for Moirae
Maria Gracia chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
Addy... all that comes to mind right now is wow.

The story was very beautiful as was the writing. You have a way with imagery that I can just transport myself into your story & really see things. The allusions to the sky, nature and the green of his eyes - they were beautiful & I enjoyed them a lot.

The way this is told; past & present was very interesting. The parts ended very nicely & the transitions felt very, very smooth.

The use of Aisa startled me, because I think of her more as Atropos. Though both names work. I was actually writing about them - the Moirae - earlier, so I thought it was funny & sweet that I found this & read. I like the idea of immortality & how you loose the beauty & just decay. Usually you hear of gods & goddesses with infinite beauty that beats the ones of mortals (well, except you know who ;b), so this was refreshing.

& then ending was lovely & sweet & the perfect closure for it. I think of the Moirae as vicious for some reason, so it was very nice to see a sensible side.

Thank you so much for posting this, I enjoyed it tremendously.

-MaGa
Deva Jasheway chapter 1 . 11/30/2010
Great story! Very well written, striking imagery. I've seen the god-mortal love affair thing before, but that doesn't mean this story isn't original. It definitely is. Good job. I'd love to read some more of your writing.