Reviews for 100 Love Letters
Aretice N. Treader chapter 12 . 10/13/2013
I was surprised by Ives, though I am glad that he's more than a careless addict. The letters in the beginning are well written, too. I like the way they match the chapter without always giving it away. I think you misspelled the word license, though. I know it's licence in the UK and license in the US, but I'm not really sure. I could be wrong. This chapter was written well enough. Nikita's accident wasn't dragged out for too long, which I appreciated.
Aretice N. Treader chapter 11 . 10/13/2013
The accident had perfect timing, but I really didn't see it coming. I liked this chapter. It was very well written, just like the other chapters.
Aretice N. Treader chapter 10 . 10/13/2013
There were a couple of punctuation mistakes, but this chapter was a good one anyway. I like the humor that the emails between Amy and Nikita bring to the story.
Aretice N. Treader chapter 9 . 10/10/2013
This chapter contained a nice balance of comedy and drama, though I did find a few words with letters missing.
Aretice N. Treader chapter 8 . 10/10/2013
The humor in this chapter was great. I actually do like that the song is basically a bunch of apologies in a bunch of different languages.
Aretice N. Treader chapter 7 . 10/10/2013
Amy's response to Nikita's question didn't exactly surprise me, though it does seem a bit out of character after all she went through to tell Nikita that he shouldn't have written a song about her. I found a couple of punctuation mistakes, but, other than those, this chapter was all right.
Aretice N. Treader chapter 6 . 10/10/2013
I like that the characters aren't completely blowing up at each other all the time. It helps the story move along. I found a few mistakes, but it happens.
Aretice N. Treader chapter 5 . 10/10/2013
That escalated quickly. I found a couple of places where you probably should have put a comma in, but this was a good chapter regardless.
Aretice N. Treader chapter 4 . 10/10/2013
That was an interesting development. I liked this chapter. I did find a few wording mistakes, though.
Aretice N. Treader chapter 3 . 10/10/2013
I found a few mistakes, but it's not a big deal. This chapter was okay.
Aretice N. Treader chapter 2 . 10/10/2013
You capitalized a word that didn't need to be capitalized, but it might have been for emphasis. I like the Mulan reference. The letter at the beginning was a good opening for a chapter. Overall, this was a great chapter.
Aretice N. Treader chapter 1 . 10/10/2013
The chapter flowed well. There were some spelling mistakes, but they were usually names.
DailyRay chapter 37 . 9/24/2013
I absolutely loved your story! You're and amazing writer and really bring this story to life. I adore Nikita and I was MADD excited when he bleached his hair again! Also, I love Ives! I truly fee a if I watched this as a movie in my head rather than read it! Truly amazing and keep up the outstanding writing!
StillWatersAreDeep chapter 36 . 9/20/2013
A great story. Thank you for sharing it with us. :)
I like that while Amy's letters brought them together at first, it was Nikita's letter who brought them back together. I actually wondered at first why the title said 100 letters when Amy only wrote 99. So, it's a great move to place letter number 100 in the last chapter. :)
Was She Not Amazing Though chapter 2 . 9/20/2013
Amy really isn't any fun, huh?

Speaking of breaking out into Disney songs, I was just talking to my girlfriend about this. Mine are "Out There," "Go the Distance," "Colors of the Wind," and "Tale as Old as Time" to name a few. :-) Grocery store aisles or out to eat at someplace fancy are ideal locations for singing, methinks.

I really wonder who her romantic interest will be. Jason doesn't seem too horrible but Amy does not seem interested in the slightest. Not even a tiny bit. :-) He rubs me the wrong way as well, too pushy without being confident enough to back it up.

What is the deal with Amy and her brother as well? I cannot wait to see that bit of back story unfold.
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