Reviews for Breaking Boundaries
Kbre17 chapter 12 . 7/27/2016
Awesome story keep it up
ManonVarendaz chapter 12 . 2/13/2014
I really hope you won't give up on this, it's great. Thank you for sharing your story.
Tailor Maid chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
Can you like PLEASSEEE update!?
V chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
What is going to happen?! I wanna know!
violet-eyez chapter 12 . 4/10/2012
is going to turn her?
Tammy Rae chapter 12 . 4/6/2012
Where's the rest of the story? It's so amazing I spent all day reading it and now it's not complete. Please finish it soon! I'm dying to know that happens next!
Tammy Rae chapter 6 . 4/6/2012
What a cliffhanger that has me reaching for the next chapter. Awesome finish!
Tammy Rae chapter 5 . 4/6/2012
I love that Milano does not back down from Linda. They are both so stubborn that they make for an interesting read.
Tammy Rae chapter 4 . 4/6/2012
I love these characters. In one chapter they do so much and you learn so much about who they are and their motivations.

It's a great story that has me hooked on every word ;). Great job!
Tammy Rae chapter 3 . 4/6/2012
"So in the mean" add "time" here.

"No" it should be "response" instead of "respond."

"A closed door plus no" delete "respond" and replace with "response."

"She had been looking forward" delete "on" and replace with "to."

In the sentence, "He didn't want anyone to know" replace "has" with "had" so that it reads, "town as had happened."

Another great chapter!
Tammy Rae chapter 2 . 4/6/2012
"Appearing with another girl under his arm at" insert "the" here.

"In the mean" insert "time" here.

"She probably still felt offended after their meeting" delete of.

"It took him" insert "and" here.

"Dylan had come to talk to her about how so called" put sorry in quotes. It conveys the sarcasm.

Loving these characters!
Tammy Rae chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
"If some one would be around" delete "would be" and replace with "was."

Great prologue. I'm hooked :)
DarkestOfNights chapter 12 . 4/5/2012
Bahhh stupid vampire bitch/whore. I hope he can save her. He's going to have a lot of explaining to do when she comes to.
DarkestOfNights chapter 11 . 3/12/2012
Craziness is going on! Lol
Meh chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
Ibdidnt like your opening paragraph to the story, but the last section was amazing.
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