Reviews for Super Toast and Butter Boy:The Heroes of Breakfast
FantasyWriterGirl101 chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
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I really like this story, as you can probably tell from all the smiley faces. It was a little hard to understand, but then again, I don't always understand things. ;P
Alis412 chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
Haha, highly comical. I actually found myself amused and chuckling along with this. Very amusing take on breakfast. Where did you find your inspiration for this? My only suggestion is to eliminate some of the speech tags. By the dialogue you created, I could understand who was talking and it'll speed up the story. Definitely liked it though. Keep up the good work.