Reviews for Keep Me Distracted
The Postscript chapter 1 . 11/30/2010
Beautiful, beautiful. I love the opening lines: "Reclining in your love/is like an old sun-worn/children's swing." What an absolutely stunning image. It reminds me of an experience I had - the difference between someone wrapping you in their arms and you leaning against them in their arms, holding you up ... physically and metaphorically speaking. You take such a simple moment and make it extraordinary. And truly, in that moment, it is, if you have the appreciation for it. Wonderful work. Keep writing! I haven't been on Fictionpress in awhile. I hope all is well with you. Best wishes!