Reviews for Tibia
lollipanda chapter 2 . 4/19/2016
good story dude, good hook on the reader and fucking awesome storyline
story chapter 26 . 7/15/2014
lovely. are you going to do Kael's story?
PoshKimberlee chapter 26 . 4/11/2014
I like your story but I feel like you could of drawn out the secrecy awhile longer and I feel like cambers and tabia romance was too fast but whatevs it was a nice story
bettyboop1124 chapter 8 . 2/25/2013
bettyboop1124 chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
Great start!
roux.fantasia chapter 26 . 1/12/2013
Enjoyed the story... Thanks for sharing this with us!

You had pretty solid character building on the main characters, though more build up on the villain might have made it even better. I guess the best villains are the ones people both love and hate? They drive up the thrill of reading the story, since they seem so close to succeeding/ do make the protagonist's life miserable, and NEEDING to know how the nice ending is reached is what makes you refuse to put down the book.

You have a few grammar/spelling issues but I understand the urge to upload a piece and get feedback before having the time to slowly read through and make minor edits to a masterpiece. Your plot pace is quite good, though! Maybe a slight tweak in the summary will draw more readers to give the story a try and you'll get more reviews, as this story deserves! (Though yeah, coming up with attention-grabbing summaries can be tricky as well...)

Anyway, do keep writing!
TheInsanityItself chapter 26 . 10/4/2011
I really do love your writing style...and yay for reading 150 pages an hour!
Ray-Anne chapter 26 . 7/18/2011
I greatly enjoyed this. It wasn't over romantic or raunchy or drawn out in battle sequence. It was a nice humble mix with a good set of characters and clear (family) dynamics.

Talented writing, it could easily bloom into something novel worthy with time, patience, and slightly more embellishment.
FamishedNight chapter 26 . 6/25/2011
Awesome! Loved it!
Rose chapter 26 . 6/1/2011
Quaint and cute; a unique outlook into the werewolf genre that manages to read like a slice of life. While the suspense could have been dragged out, the action enhanced, and Tibia's secretive nature could have been truly secretive, the story still highlights the character's well and involves the reader.

Heavy on the dialogue and lacking a bit in description, though dialogue characterization was very well done.
ImmortalVamps chapter 26 . 5/22/2011
I loved, loved, loved, this story. Please tell me you guys are going to do a sequal. Please! Please! With a cherry on top!
chimeracandor chapter 25 . 5/19/2011
Damn that was amazing i always appreciate it when people have fun with the werewolf mythology. It is extremely cool that you mentioned the difference between born werewolves and changed ones.
Kara P chapter 25 . 5/17/2011
Aw, that was a cute ending. I cant wait until the epilogue, thought Im sad its ending. :
Aletta94 chapter 25 . 5/16/2011
HOLLAND greets you back! Haha

Loved this chapter!

It was really sweet, you know. And I must admit..

I liked the action in the previous chapter.

I guess you're writing a sequel too?

Keep up the good work!

Aletta94 chapter 24 . 5/9/2011
started reading this story not long ago and I was completely enthralled!

You're sure doing a great job!

A bit too much dialogue, I think, but it's good D

Can't wait for the next chapter!

*greets from Holland

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