good story dude, good hook on the reader and fucking awesome storyline

lovely. are you going to do Kael's story?

I like your story but I feel like you could of drawn out the secrecy awhile longer and I feel like cambers and tabia romance was too fast but whatevs it was a nice story

YOU GUYS ARE DOING AN AMAZING JOB BUILDING THE CHARACTERS. THEY FEEL LIKE FRIENDS.

Great start!

Enjoyed the story... Thanks for sharing this with us!

You had pretty solid character building on the main characters, though more build up on the villain might have made it even better. I guess the best villains are the ones people both love and hate? They drive up the thrill of reading the story, since they seem so close to succeeding/ do make the protagonist's life miserable, and NEEDING to know how the nice ending is reached is what makes you refuse to put down the book.

You have a few grammar/spelling issues but I understand the urge to upload a piece and get feedback before having the time to slowly read through and make minor edits to a masterpiece. Your plot pace is quite good, though! Maybe a slight tweak in the summary will draw more readers to give the story a try and you'll get more reviews, as this story deserves! (Though yeah, coming up with attention-grabbing summaries can be tricky as well...)

Anyway, do keep writing!

I really do love your writing style...and yay for reading 150 pages an hour!

I greatly enjoyed this. It wasn't over romantic or raunchy or drawn out in battle sequence. It was a nice humble mix with a good set of characters and clear (family) dynamics.

Talented writing, it could easily bloom into something novel worthy with time, patience, and slightly more embellishment.

Awesome! Loved it!

Quaint and cute; a unique outlook into the werewolf genre that manages to read like a slice of life. While the suspense could have been dragged out, the action enhanced, and Tibia's secretive nature could have been truly secretive, the story still highlights the character's well and involves the reader.

Heavy on the dialogue and lacking a bit in description, though dialogue characterization was very well done.

I loved, loved, loved, this story. Please tell me you guys are going to do a sequal. Please! Please! With a cherry on top!

Damn that was amazing i always appreciate it when people have fun with the werewolf mythology. It is extremely cool that you mentioned the difference between born werewolves and changed ones.

Aw, that was a cute ending. I cant wait until the epilogue, thought Im sad its ending. :

HOLLAND greets you back! Haha

Loved this chapter!

It was really sweet, you know. And I must admit..

I liked the action in the previous chapter.

I guess you're writing a sequel too?

Keep up the good work!

*Aletta

started reading this story not long ago and I was completely enthralled!

You're sure doing a great job!

A bit too much dialogue, I think, but it's good D

Can't wait for the next chapter!

*greets from Holland

Aletta