Reviews for near ascension
drink me pretty chapter 1 . 11/30/2010
words-my words, at least-

in comparison to yours, well,

goddamn, they mean nothing.

my subconsciousness

stirs beneath my consciousness,

simmering as i read this.

bravo.
cab fed hig chapter 1 . 11/30/2010
this is beautiful and was exciting to read.

your vocabulary wasn't overdone; it was perfect and felt meant to be.

It's hopeful and refreshing and I really liked it.