|Reviews for No Longer Invisible|
| Insanity Streak chapter 1 . 11/30/2010
This is quite a deep and thoughtful poem. I enjoyed all the different ideas and questions you presented- it got me to think.
I really enjoyed the second and fourth stanzas. I enjoyed the fourth because the question within it held such acceptance death and non- existance. I enjoyed the second because of the wind metaphor.
Also, in the eighth stanza you spelt because wrong- I am guessing it's just a typo.
With the line, "Give it a moment to see the truth!" I feel the explanation mark seems unnecessary; for me the voice of the poem was calm and accepting, not passionate and fierce. The voice doesn't need to yell or exclaim.
Anyway, enjoyable poem and it made me think. :D