Reviews for Shedding Layers of Mouth
Nyrihaz chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
This is has to be one of the most confusing, terribly amaizing poems I've read in a long time. I love how jumpy-jumpy!-your style is, with that sharp play of word on words.

And, oh, the irony! I loved the irony. "We play this worldly-game, Charades..." -that line is so good, that I can describe it! Charades! I hate charades, and how we love to still play them.

The ending-what can I say? It's totally brilliant.

Read you later,

Nyrihaz