Reviews for Werewolf Love |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Please UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() awww they're so cute! :P but where's her family? |
![]() ![]() ![]() it was short but amazingg! i wonder what will happen next, ur keeping me on my toes xD |
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![]() ![]() ![]() first of all, you should start a new line every time someone new talks... just saying, and it's easier to read that way. otherwise, i really like it, although your style is quite different, changing POV so fast ... but i'm really excited to see what's going to happen next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love ur story! but it gets kinda confusing, when u say its like Cori, then u start talking like Aiden, & im getting confused, wasnt his exgf's name like brittany spelled weird? & there were quite a few mess ups like once it was supposed to be how but in her it was ho w. there was also an instance where u had in (i concluded it was supposed to be and) but overall i thought this is a really awesome story! id be willing to edit if ud like! D oh btw it is usually easier to read if u but more spaces like my message. this is not a flame, its just critisism, & my awe] |
![]() ![]() ![]() .gee |
![]() ![]() ![]() i have NO idea where this is going, buut keep up the good work ;D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great updates. Aiden needs to realize that what Cori saw really hurt her, and with her past, he should understand why she shut him out. I can't believe he's going to go talk to Becca, I bet if saw Cori talking to another guy he'd be hurt too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i knew becca was a b*! urgh why is she such an unbearable {insert curses here} ( |
![]() ![]() ![]() stuff i left out in my last review 'cause my mom was calling me : becca is a total b*. i can't help but think that jake has something to do with "HIM"! kate and remy are so cute! omg they are so adorable :D ... yea i can't remember anything else -_- |
![]() ![]() ![]() i'm so happy i happened to run into this story :D ahh so good! wow cori is REALLY into shopping isn't she? grr why won't "HE" just leave her alone? "HE" needs to get a life instead of terrorizing her D: well, update soon, i'll be waiting, great job so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() good chap i cant wait to see what happens next. update soon plz |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is good, very thrilling! but on the last paragraph the Cori one, half way through you change chracter POV's lol great chapter though :) |