Reviews for Elemental
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
I really liked this. It was so cute and sweet. All the descriptions were good, but I especially liked how you used his fire to bring you from hell. I expected it to be ice or water or something like that, but this worked and wasn't so expected.

The only thing is it seemed weird that the second stanza didn't fit in the format with your blank starting the stanzas. Maybe changing it to "Your hands full of fire" or something like that?

Other than that, really cute piece.

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rust phoenix chapter 1 . 12/22/2010
This is truly beautiful. I love the rhythm to it, and the way you go through different elements in each stanza. The last two lines are especially strong.
lymli chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
it's sweet, I like how you compare that one with the nature, it felt like love means all.
Subbie chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
I love this! Exactly the way I feel about someone...