|Reviews for Dragonfly|
| Lady Scarlet of Stormhold chapter 6 . 2/9/2011
Oh... Wow! I'm intrigued (as ever!)! :D Love it! (Still!) Keep writing! :D
| Lady Scarlet of Stormhold chapter 5 . 2/2/2011
Heh heh heh! Love the "Have fun falling in love with your phone" bit. XD I'm intrigued to know why Dr Lauren doesn't like Daniel. Yet again, please write more soon! However, I do think that the chapters are a bit short, to say this is the fifth chapter and they're all short... But anyway. Keep writing! :)
| Danzi chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
Wow, a really well done opening, fresh, original and immediately captivating! The first few paragraphs are just amazing, I love it! The characters are also done really well, I love the little thought commentaries they both have and the way you've described their encounters. Im defo gonna read more when I can, well done!
| Lady Scarlet of Stormhold chapter 4 . 1/29/2011
Ooh, a final decison! I want to know what happens next! And I want to know what El's uncle has realised, why Daniel Morris is unlucky! I'm really intrigued. Please write more soon! XD
| Lady Scarlet of Stormhold chapter 3 . 1/28/2011
Heh, the last bit's quite funny: "they were medicine and scaring people" "wandered off to find someone to bother" lol! I like it. I like how you start off the same/nearly the same as the previous chapter (and I also like "This new magical prince" and "did you actually bother talking to him this time?")
I think Dr Lauren can be added to another of my favourite characters... He just seems awesome (I'd quite like to see him scare somebody, personnally!).
Keep writing! :D
| Pale White Shadow chapter 3 . 1/27/2011
I like this. Simple, short, sweet, awkward. Very good.
| Lady Scarlet of Stormhold chapter 2 . 1/26/2011
I likeses! And I like Dr Roy, how her first line is, "I don't want the details, just tell me if you got her number or not". I found that quite funny, as well as the "he could probably fall in love with up to fourteen girls a day", which, if I remember rightly, was said about Eliza in the first chapter. XD It's awesome! Keep writing! XD
| Lady Scarlet of Stormhold chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
Ah, that's quite sweet. I like how they're both all awkward, and we get to hear both of their thoughts, each berating themselves for saying what they said. I like it, and I think the way you introduce the story with the particles colliding is very interesting. I found the bit, "...though it's debatable whether this was a coincidence or the boredom of the elderly" quite funny. I also like the line just a few sentences after that one, "Of course, it wasn't the beginning, it was just another part - but it's a convenient place to start telling the tale." I'm not really sure what I like about it, but it's just kind of mysterious and cool. Are you going to write any more of this story? If you are, I'd be interested in reading it, I think it'd make for a good more-than-one-chapter-long-story. XD
| Ingthing150 chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
"And thus the two most awkward people in England met."
| DashingtoFluttershy chapter 1 . 12/4/2010
Cheesy! :D I like it so far! Can't wait to read more!