Reviews for make me out of cardboard
dokidokipanic chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
i often find myself in between ash and disaster!
punctured.lungs chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
"you cross the street at every green light./ some people think you want to be hit." beautiful line, right there.
downforthecount chapter 1 . 1/6/2011
I loved the final metaphor. Gorgeous.
Elephants Forget chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
This is beautiful. I love the imagery and the final metaphor of crossing the street.
J. J. Boucher chapter 1 . 12/4/2010
A bit confusing, but very sensitive. Sensitivity is a very good aspect of writing that few people have.
lymli chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
it sounded like you were mean to each other.