|Reviews for Kidnapped Criminal|
| BlessSuperWhoLock chapter 1 . 10/28/2011
| Christina Wynnwood chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
Why... why... why? Why does this have to be a oneshot?
You could go so many routes with this! It totally isn't fair to leave it at that ending! I was expecting more!
I don't know if I agree with the random makeout session in front of the foster parents but otherwise, this is completely brilliant!
I was reading it, thinking about what I would write for a review and my biggest gripe was not knowing anything about the main character right off the bat. I wasn't even sure that she was female, other than her name.
But that gripe went away halfway into the story. So I'm happy now. Lol!
Anyway, great job! but it shouldn't be a one shot! No fair!
| Spritefyre chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
Haha, I love the ending. I love this story and now it ends.
| The Weatherwitch chapter 1 . 2/2/2011