Reviews for Lonely
Elizabeth Alan chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
I really like this and could relate to it.
BookcraZzaY chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
omg heart it


amazing job
SomeRandomScribbles chapter 1 . 12/4/2010
Very moving :) We all feel like this sometimes, so a lot of people could connect with this poem. You express emotion really clearly, especially in the lines: "Laughing when I want to cry/Smiling when I want to sob".

There are a couple of typos - ("Walk be carefree") - but not many :) I'd have probably put "Read romantic novels" so you'd have the repetition, but that's just an idea

Good stuff :)
lymli chapter 1 . 12/4/2010
I guess nobod wants to be alone, so this it's touching.