Reviews for Loving Shea |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Cute story. I wasn't really planning on reviewing but I thought I'd point out that Mark, being Shea's friend would refer to her as 'tu' and not 'vous'. |
![]() ![]() ![]() gosh i loved d stry but author note made me have tears gosh TRUE LOVE NEVER LASTS *SIGH* its pretty fucked up life coz we see love nly in stries :( not in REAL WORLD life is a bitch anyway way to awesum stry |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story brought tears to my eyes, but hey, I'll admit it, I'm a sap to be fair. Seriously though, this was brilliant. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i loved this OS! super-duper cute! you know what i loved the most? the fact that this story was inspired from a real life incident! Plus i loved it how you have kept a track of their relationship in ur note! Absolutely Adorable! You're a great friend! |
![]() ![]() ![]() awww:D really cute! i like the author's note, and how you track their relationship! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this! I was mad at Shea, though, when she just left him there and all... I could understand Mark's hurt. But, anyways, good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was so sweet! Hahaha. I love how it was a cliche but not really one either... Okay, I might not be making sense. It was lovely, though :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWESOME! I LOVED IT! THE FRENCH PART MADE ME SMILE!:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg! amazing! made me float in the air! i read it wile listening to just the way you are by bruno mars... absolute BLISS! i wish ud let me edit it a lil bit though :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know why you write a story and call it disgusting and sappy in your authors note...when it isn't. This story is really cute I should say. Hehe the pace was good and I can basically tell how many pages this oneshot is through the size of my scrollbar. I see that size often with Dare's Consequences. Haha okay I sidetracked. I loved it, it was well written and I bet your friend would be happy you wrote this for her. Good job. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() THAT WAS SO FREAKING ADORABLE! I usually hated sappy stories... but dis i just read after a long drought! so i loved it ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Naww...that was a super cute and sweet story! Congrats to your two friends! (: ~SnoQueen |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was a amazing story i dont think it was sappy at all! :) It was just simply,awesomely, PERFECT! Continue making amazing stories! :) |