Cute story. I wasn't really planning on reviewing but I thought I'd point out that Mark, being Shea's friend would refer to her as 'tu' and not 'vous'.

gosh i loved d stry but author note made me have tears gosh TRUE LOVE NEVER LASTS *SIGH* its pretty fucked up life coz we see love nly in stries :( not in REAL WORLD life is a bitch anyway way to awesum stry

This story brought tears to my eyes, but hey, I'll admit it, I'm a sap to be fair.

Seriously though, this was brilliant.

i loved this OS! super-duper cute! you know what i loved the most? the fact that this story was inspired from a real life incident! Plus i loved it how you have kept a track of their relationship in ur note! Absolutely Adorable! You're a great friend!

awww:D really cute! i like the author's note, and how you track their relationship!

I enjoyed this!

I was mad at Shea, though, when she just left him there and all... I could understand Mark's hurt.

But, anyways, good work!

This was so sweet! Hahaha. I love how it was a cliche but not really one either... Okay, I might not be making sense. It was lovely, though :)

AWESOME! I LOVED IT! THE FRENCH PART MADE ME SMILE!:)

omg! amazing! made me float in the air!

i read it wile listening to just the way you are by bruno mars... absolute BLISS!

i wish ud let me edit it a lil bit though :P

I don't know why you write a story and call it disgusting and sappy in your authors note...when it isn't. This story is really cute I should say. Hehe the pace was good and I can basically tell how many pages this oneshot is through the size of my scrollbar. I see that size often with Dare's Consequences. Haha okay I sidetracked. I loved it, it was well written and I bet your friend would be happy you wrote this for her. Good job. :)

THAT WAS SO FREAKING ADORABLE! I usually hated sappy stories... but dis i just read after a long drought! so i loved it !

Naww...that was a super cute and sweet story!

Congrats to your two friends! (:

~SnoQueen

that was a amazing story i dont think it was sappy at all! :) It was just simply,awesomely, PERFECT! Continue making amazing stories! :)