|Reviews for Undisclosed Desire: Part I Birth to a Goddess|
| camphb chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
this is pretty good. i like it. i actually never heard of this web before, since i write on . anyway, there are a few grammatical problems, since you go a little from present tense to past tense, but besides that, this is perfectlyk fine. great job. be PROUD of yourself.