Reviews for I Need You
Marionettes chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
This is touching :) reminds me of young love.

Some of the stanza breaks are somewhat erratic however.

All around, beautiful .

SnackySnackSnackSnackSnack chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
"baby, what's the sun supposed to do?" i love that line. ) also, "i think of how much prettier i'd be - if you were standing next to me." you have a way with words, one of the best authors i've seen, definitely.
lymli chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
I like the repetition bout the sun and the bones part.

cool piece.