ok miss impatient here is your review.

first I loved the first sentence. It really made me go hm MUST READ NOW! anyway i totally love Noel... even though he may be a murderer... I still think he's super sweet. I loved all his dialogue it was supa dupa believable. like i really love Noel lol. I enjoy the way your pacing things because by now alot of people have their O/cs bangin by now! but that last "i wish i kissed him that day." was so cute -

I'm like dying to see what all happens. i freaking love this story! i know we like to tease eachother Hans, but i must admit your an amazing amazing writer.

ok? im dismissing myself from this review now...

cheers,

landa.

please write more!

this story is super fantabulous!

you introduce the characters with enough information so we know what they are like but give us just the right amount of thinking room so we can make the characters fit our thoughts.

it is realistic and not hopelessy stupid romancy like twilight...

PLEASE WRITE MORE

ok... I approve! So THIS is what you've been hiding from me! Well let me just start off by saying i'm stoked i finally get to read your writing! and that it doesn't suck (: quite the opposite chief. I love all your detail and you're very good with imagery. this is my favorite line "The disgust, which would have shown on my face if it wasn't so early in the morning, was boiling beneath my skin, growing warmer as it succumbed me." so freaking EPIC! im really impressed with you right now (first time for everything right? bahaha)you must write so good because your the oldest child xD. Anyway you better keep updating this story regularly because it's awesome and i know where you live so i'll kick you if you don't! OK... im done!

cheers,

captain kharissa ;)

I love it! Please continue writing more!(: