|Reviews for Tale of a broken friendship|
| kitachiuchiha chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
Wow. All this time, all i have been doing is moping about in school hoping somebody would pity me and see what the traitors for what they were. Guess why it got me nowhere. Your poem really inspired me. Hope i could go to school without a care in the world to what they would say :)
BIG thank you to your poem. It really made me think straight instead of being angry all the time. Hope to see more beautiful, inspirational works from you :)
| SomeRandomScribbles chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
Good language, and a clear story behind it :) I like how you've set out this piece to show the changes in emotion and plot.
The rhythm changes are a little confusing at times, and the tense changes too, but overall, a great poem