Reviews for Chaos
Pandaemonic Paradigm chapter 1 . 8/6/2006
That's a pretty cool poem. I like how simply it ends. "Echoes off mountains controls me now" made the least sense to me.
Montiago chapter 1 . 6/30/2006
your title's not the only things that chiche...the poems "wonderful words" are nothing special. maybe if they hadent been used in the thousands of other poems on this site...
Rozlin chapter 1 . 1/8/2005
very good. very very good.
ThePrue chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
The words you used were very good, i realy got what you were trying to say, but it wouldn't hurt to change the title of it to something more unique, i even hace a story under the same name, no comparison, i liked it.
Tweek chapter 1 . 6/4/2001
This is really good, dark and depressing, but still great poetry.
solii rose tinted chapter 1 . 5/18/2001
Very powerful words. I understand the sleep thing- it is a nothingness that mostly feels better than the 'chaos' of reality. Unfortunately, I only managed 3 hrs last night. The specific words seem to be chosen carefully; they are beautiful in themselves and contribute to the style of your piece. Great writing. Solii