|Reviews for Chaos|
| Pandaemonic Paradigm chapter 1 . 8/6/2006
That's a pretty cool poem. I like how simply it ends. "Echoes off mountains controls me now" made the least sense to me.
| Montiago chapter 1 . 6/30/2006
your title's not the only things that chiche...the poems "wonderful words" are nothing special. maybe if they hadent been used in the thousands of other poems on this site...
| Rozlin chapter 1 . 1/8/2005
very good. very very good.
| ThePrue chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
The words you used were very good, i realy got what you were trying to say, but it wouldn't hurt to change the title of it to something more unique, i even hace a story under the same name, no comparison, i liked it.
| Tweek chapter 1 . 6/4/2001
This is really good, dark and depressing, but still great poetry.
| solii rose tinted chapter 1 . 5/18/2001
Very powerful words. I understand the sleep thing- it is a nothingness that mostly feels better than the 'chaos' of reality. Unfortunately, I only managed 3 hrs last night. The specific words seem to be chosen carefully; they are beautiful in themselves and contribute to the style of your piece. Great writing. ~Solii