|Reviews for Memory|
| Ally.B.2013 chapter 1 . 12/12/2010
I love it! Keep on writing!
| Person You Don't Know chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
Sorry, but I think you have some work to do. Your character is soo typical. Books like these attract teenage drama idiots in highschool who are always infatuated in "cute" guys and think too much of their social status to realize what's happening around them. Oblivious dumb butts, that's what they are. Real works of art are books. Those reel in devoted readers who don't gush animately about unconsidered gossip.
Also, you're too repetative, and you're chapters are too short. The story is too fast paced in a bad way.
P.S. If you buy manga books, you'll regret that abnormally large ammount of money you spent on them in the future. Trust me.