|Reviews for White|
| Zion's Arcadia chapter 1 . 1/10/2011
A gorgeous piece, if I do say so myself. I felt some of it was a little vague, though. I didn't really understand what happened to the Man, but... I dunno. Just a felt a bit confusing is all.
Also, near the end you use the wrong tense for possess ('She is possesses by the memory...'). I'm not sure if that was intentional or not, but it was awkward to read, so I figured I'd point it out.
| Agent Striker chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
ohmigod that was beautiful, you write really well! SO SAD
| sparksflyXOXO chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
beautifully written, its very depressing tho.
| Ellenore Carter chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
Oh, It's so beautiful