This is my absolute favorite story by you. (I will not delete you. I will not delete you. By the way, I deleted a lot of my favorites yesterday.)

The imagery in this was fantastic and it seriously chilled me. I like the line "Not for the better."

I also liked the bold/ italicized words.

Fantastic.

I am in school. My friend is reading this review and she's going to get mad at me if I don't start working, so goodbye.