AWESOME STORY!
You HAVE to update again!
(Oh, and her father is a total jerk and he needs to leave immediately.)

-Angel Princess 31

OH MY GOSH I HAVE BEEN BINGE READING SINCE I STARTED THIS BUT NOW I HAVE TO SAY - I LOOOOVE IT! Romeo and Juliet was awesome, and I totally ship Char and Evan! X3
Where has this been my whole life?!

-Angel Princess 31

Kill him with fire

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I hate that last paragraph, now Charlotte is just like any other girl that Evan has made out with outside the school against the wall. you could have done better

wow this is good. I am almost addicted to this story

FRIGGIN UPDATE NOW
PIANOIS COMING
TO HITCHA

thought u was gonna update

FREAKINNG UPDATE NOW BEFORE I DROP A PIANO ON YOU

Please complete the story :(I

Ooohhh... The dad is back. I wonder why, and isn't it a coincidence since she started dating Jonathan? But he is happily married with a new kid, he should definitely be happy. So why is he here...?

Now, do you like Taylor Swift because you're using a lot of her songs. Well, her songs are pefect when it comes to romance, but still. Their first date was so perfect. There was nothing too big to distract from the actual date. There was some actual heart to heart which made it more normal.

I can't believe that Charlotte is that serious about scars. Personally, I kind of like them, but I don't go to get them on purpose. I never would have thought of Charlotte as insecure, I always thought she had the confidence. She does, but now she's getting a tad bit insecure.

Aw, poor Evan. Getting into an accident at such a young age must suck. I would have been scarred for life and afraid of oncoming traffic. I sense something bad about to happen...

So, Dean has a different motive. Instead of trying to get Charlotte's attention he goes straight to her dad. I don't understand why, so I really can't see what's the reason. I also can't wait until their first date. Knowing both of them, something is going to go wrong.