|Reviews for Fantasy|
| Insanity Streak chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
You described a fantasy all right! The thing that I most admire about this poem is that it delves into the more sexual and animalistic side of humans and their feelings and you don't get many poems (from what I, personally, have been exposed to) that focuses on this side of the story with such bluntness; its usually tip- toed around with vague sentiments of awkward love.
Plus you really emphasise this sensuality with the short sentence structure. Its very honest and real, it doesn't deal with immature ideals about first love and eternal love. Very bold of you.