Bravo! They finally kissed! And what a way to remember their first kiss! Great job on the two updates! I enjoyed seeing more of Kristina/Aleksei, and also the mysterious train ticket left between the two books. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Finally he had admitted to liking her! I love it! Fantastic chapter can't wait for the next one!

I wanted to congratulate on a well done story! It has me hooked, always waiting to see what is going to happen to Polina next. I love the detail you put in to Russia, and their way of life. Simply fascinating to me, as I have never seen anything other than a few snow flurries! I also love the folklore and mythology that you have included in the story. I think it would be interesting to see some more interaction with Lana and Kristina, and their mother too. However, you may have that planned for unread chapters, so I can't complain!

A great story, and I can't wait for the next chapter~!

Welcome back great update! The story is definitely getting more and more interesting! can't wait for the update!

Hello!

I caught a post you made in the Supernatural section of the forums and figured I'd give your story a shot since you're working around Russia. I am very fond of the country and have been looking into many aspects of the culture and such.

You have a few grammatical issues, nothing massive. Your punctuation is also a little shaky, as you're missing some commas in key sentences that lose their, "power" because of the lack.

Your pacing is also a little off. It's quite a bit of information you're trying to relay in one chapter, and it makes it very difficult to get to know the character telling the story, and relating to her, I find.

I felt like I was reading a cultural blog for a moment, rather than a fictional story.

There are also a few issues regarding to how a person of Russian decent would relate to their elders. Dima is a diminutive of Dmitri and as such would probably not be used by a granddaughter, just out of respect.

I haven't read the next chapter, but I figured I'd get that off my chest first and then continue with it. I don't want to forget anything I caught.

I hope you don't mind my review.

Please, continue!This is great!

First, thanks so much for suggesting this story (and i'm sorry it's taken me so long to start reading it!)

Second, i freaking love it!

You're imagery and descriptions are amazing, i really got a feel for Russia. I especially loved the sotry-telling perspective your character has taken in the opening chapter, dishing out the facts about her country and explaining everything clearly was super helpful. Just a really perfect chapter!

Anyway, great start and i can't wait to read more!

This is such a strong story! I love how you keep us all guessing as to what's really going on with Konstantin. You had me convinced he was Polina's uncle, the WHAM, the truth. Haha, I can't wait to read the next chapter of this!

Love this...your protagonist is great and totally believable. I adore the way you've layered her together, all the experiences and history she's part of, the way the sci-fi story grows out of her relationship with these people she loves and so, because they are known to her and their relationship reads as genuine, the werewolf business is suddenly plausible to the reader too. Just fantastic.

great story! :)

aw thats soo sweet D I realy like this story.. it doesn't sound like the rest of them.. so its kind og refreshing -. Have a great holiday

i seriously love this story

please please please update soon ;D

Hi, I'm writing this review because most authors want at least some kind of feedback and so I just wanted to give you a reason for why I am not going to stop reading this story. Your characters feel kind of flat. When they talk it feels like the purpose is more to drive the plot and give the reader information than for a character to express themselves. Try adding some personality into the dialogue. Otherwise, it's an interesting idea. Good luck!

Lovely story! Keep up the fantastic work. The character development is fantastic and the plot-line is addicting. I can't wait for more! Keep up the good work!

Wow. Didn't see that coming!