Reviews for Mary Anne
mondo strano chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
This is really cool. If you were to edit it further I would suggest watching your repitition of phrases. e.g. "Her muddy, dirty hair turned long and pure white reaching her knees and her skin became almost pure white." But that's really all I would recommend. Thanks again for reviewing my story:).

-mondo strano
Iris Musicia ft. Eliza Ghost chapter 1 . 12/12/2010
wow, very creative. From the title I had not expected anything like that. It's actually quite good.

-Eliza Ghost

ps, you can thank my good pal Fakety Mcfakename for refering me to you.
Fakety Mcfakename chapter 1 . 12/11/2010
reminds me of the hope diamond. for such a short story, their sure is alot in it. grand job.