Reviews for MiniOrg In My Inbox
lookingwest chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
Liked the formatting you did in this, I think it's quite relatable...especially for a reader who checks their email seriously every ten minutes when on the computer, but, that is beside the point :D My favorite part of this was definitely the paragraph about relating email to sex, and the imagery there-I think it's a great comparison and metaphor for it. Liked the format choices in the "Let's say..." paragraph too, brought a different spin on a rant-like piece with some nice prolific lines.