Reviews for Eternal Love |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was good but there were a few small gramatical errors. I am just going to say one; at the beginning you said, "Their here" when you should have put "They're here" You just used the wrong type of they're(there their). There were a few others but I'm not going to tell them to you. I hope you will reread this and fix the gramatical errors you find. |
![]() ![]() ![]() you write well..and i love it :) and yeah..add more..it'll be fantastic _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love the ideas! But a little more detail would be better. I'm going to check out some of your other writing now :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() absolutely amazing. just one thing- ADD MORE! ;D i would love to hear more of your ideas on your stories, so perhaps you could give me an email? You've inspired me, ;) thanks :) x |