|Reviews for Long—Lasting New|
| Vegetarian Meatballs chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
I liked all the alliteration in the first half of the piece. Overall it had a nice flow. Nice work and thanks for sharing.
| the sun softly smiles chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
I like the line "Would you be consistent?" It almost sounds exasperated, and with the list of desired actions following, that's emphasized even more.
Nice work :)