Reviews for Break Up
Domina chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
This is great, its bitter-yet-somehow-humorous dialogue is wonderfully unique. Really well done
cecyouyed chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
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the sun softly smiles chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
oh my :( this is very emotional and the situation is so... sad to me. I cannot imagine not praying for any period of time greater than a few hours.

but this is deep, and your writing really reflects your stinging bitterness.

- Leila