Reviews for Thackary
lianoid chapter 1 . 12/18/2010
I enjoyed the imagery and alliteration in this; you always have a wonderful way with words and this poem is no exception. Your descriptions made the imagery quite vivid and it almost has a dream-like quality to it that lent for a wonderful flow. Speaking of which, great job with that. The way you punctuated and formatted the piece really helped create a fantastic rhythm and flow that made for a solid piece all around.